Expand on the introduction with the first paragraph describing the trends after summarising the significance of 1999 in music and the second paragraph going into slightly more detail on the success of artists, singles and albums during the year
Include More detail on Girl Groups & Boy Bands - much more is required on Girl Groups, on Boy Bands, expand Westlife section (only first three singles as fourth is discussed in Christmas Number one) and expand Backstreet Boys, who were globally the most successful boyband during 1999
Add Chart positions for acts in the American Acts section
Include other acts into the section
Move Ronan Keating's debut single explanation from Boybands section to Film Music section
Include More acts into the Latin & Europop section - more explanation on their impact and their transformation of music
Include More acts in the Novelty Acts section, as only chart-topping acts are in there - there were other successes
Include More detail on the Production Teams' success and also others to be included
Include More detail on the Spice Girls - what Victoria did during the year - if not in the music industry, why wasn't she?
Re-name Country Pop to something else, unless the success of other artists such as LeAnn Rimes can be put in there; it seems silly to have a section dedicated JUST on Shania Twain despite the collosal success of Come On Over
IncludeMore detail on the British acts in the Brit Awards section
Include More detail on acts in Pop Divas section as the secton is very Britney vs Christina focused
Include More detail on S Club 7 and Lolly in the Pop Acts section
